Monday, September 19, 2011

Saberi - Assignment 1 - Take 2!!

Hello again!!! This is Saberi, again.. I took Alex's advice and I think it looks better now. Thanks Alex!! Anymore comments would be great!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Saberi,

    This one is better than your previous version!Good job!
    But I think the last part" ...allow to talk to people." the sound is a little bit faster than the mouth. "...talk to..." is a hard part to make lip sync, but it is still a good piece!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hey Saberi, Daniel here.. great stuff i think you are hitting the right letters on time, just in some of them need a little bit more time, maybe hold it for a frame or two so it can be read, the part where she says "never be aloud " your missing the V and the B and LOUD, the V and B are though choices, because they are really close to each other, but try to hit those shapes and see how it looks, but i think you should at least hit one for sure, and the ALOUD the trick is getting a nice read on the transition from A to U you could get some micro arcs in there for sure :), for people is the same as V and B, hit those P's, first P follows an Eee, then P again and O shape...

    i Love the antic you are having in the NEEEver LOL... keep it up!... just plus it a little more!...

    one last note on the eyes, i know you haven't touched them yet but,the screen left is going up and down a lot, pick where you want to accentuate and haven just one eyebrow raise... ;) hope this all makes sense!... cheers!

    ReplyDelete