Hello Everyone!!
I'm Saberi from the Monday morning class. Let me know what you think of my assignment below. Personally, I think, I still need to work on the part where she says "...to talk to people." To many T's messing with the P's in "people" and I can't figure out which one's more important. What does everybody else think?
I'm Saberi from the Monday morning class. Let me know what you think of my assignment below. Personally, I think, I still need to work on the part where she says "...to talk to people." To many T's messing with the P's in "people" and I can't figure out which one's more important. What does everybody else think?
Hey Saberi!
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It's looking good so far but I think what you need in your people is the close mouth shape on the P in the beginning. I think it would "read" better with closing the lips because there is no designation.
I think it would help if there is more open vs closed mouth shapes will help you through it. Right now, its all open. The closing of the lips will separate things a bit nicer. :D
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Oh! Did I write monday! boy, this is what no sleep does to you..
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