Looking great Josh! There are only a few things I noticed:
-The dad's fingers sticking out on his right side in the very beginning is a little distracting.
-I like his double-arm exasperated gesture, and think it could use some weight shift and maybe an exagerrated head/eye roll to really sell a defeated sigh.
Thanks Tyler, I know everyone is crunched with finals but the feedback is so helpful. Thanks for taking the time. How's your stuff going? Anything for me see so I can return the feedback favor?
Josh, this is looking really good. The arm gesture that the dad makes is a great idea. Maybe the shoulders could sink just a little more to make him look more defeated. And I really like the son's facial expression at the end. Great work!
Looking great Josh! There are only a few things I noticed:
ReplyDelete-The dad's fingers sticking out on his right side in the very beginning is a little distracting.
-I like his double-arm exasperated gesture, and think it could use some weight shift and maybe an exagerrated head/eye roll to really sell a defeated sigh.
Keep on truckin'!
Thanks Tyler,
ReplyDeleteI know everyone is crunched with finals but the feedback is so helpful. Thanks for taking the time. How's your stuff going? Anything for me see so I can return the feedback favor?
My mind brain-blanked on the blog over the weekend, but I just posted some stuff!
DeleteJosh, this is looking really good. The arm gesture that the dad makes is a great idea. Maybe the shoulders could sink just a little more to make him look more defeated. And I really like the son's facial expression at the end. Great work!
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