Here are my 2 cents - I like this dialogue piece. I would move the camera a bit up closer as there is too much dead space right now. Also, the soldier seems to be off balance with both of his knees bending. I like the facial expressions and head tilt towards the end but I think the lip sync is a bit off still. As I said, it is quite difficult to see right now. Also, his right hand seems a bit too slow as it comes down. I know you're still working on this but I hope that also helps!
i think he looks a little odd too with both of his knees bent like that. his hand does feel slow when it comes down the first time. the piece would be better if the camera was a little closer to the character. i like it a lot though.
Hey Alex,
ReplyDeleteHere are my 2 cents - I like this dialogue piece. I would move the camera a bit up closer as there is too much dead space right now. Also, the soldier seems to be off balance with both of his knees bending. I like the facial expressions and head tilt towards the end but I think the lip sync is a bit off still. As I said, it is quite difficult to see right now. Also, his right hand seems a bit too slow as it comes down. I know you're still working on this but I hope that also helps!
i think he looks a little odd too with both of his knees bent like that. his hand does feel slow when it comes down the first time. the piece would be better if the camera was a little closer to the character. i like it a lot though.
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