Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Hsiu Wen_shot11



Hi class,

I think the lip sync "...a bit..." is not clear. Also I'm not sure whether Luisa would put down her hand in the shot. Please tell me any issues I have to improve. Thanks!

2 comments:

  1. How about put her hand down right after she says "hey"?

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  2. I would work on her body a bit she is a bit stiff, have her drift a bit to the right and add a bit of Twist and "C Bend" in her spine

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