Hey guys,
This is Vincent, and here is the blocking of shot04 this week.
I change the action and floowing the direction that you guys and Dave give to me last week.
I hope it works.
Please give me feedback!!!
I need suggestion so much!!!
Sincerely
Vincent
Hey Vincent! This is coming out nice. My suggestion to you would be as he talks he should move his head a bit more. It seems way to subtle right now. Maybe it would be good to turn it more towards his right hand and also not to have it go back again to the starting position at your last keyframe. It also seems as if it is not in sync with the hand movement.
ReplyDeleteAlso, his left hand, I would have it facing upward just like the right hand so as to give more emphasis.
Hope that helps!!
Best, Agni
Hey Vincent!
ReplyDeleteMy only comment would be that it looks a bit delayed. It kinda looks like he is saying his dialog and then remembers that he had put his hand up, which is kind of unnatural in the natural sense of speaking. I guess you could just select all the keys and pull them back. :)
Thank you guys for giving me comment!!! It always help!!!and I really like it. I will fix it!
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