Hey, here is my blocking of shot 13, I haven't add audio yet. So what do you think about the actions of these three characters? Hope to get useful suggestions from you all!
Hi there! I really like this shot and the walk cycle! I would recommend to have both of the other characters move slightly as she approaches them as right now they seem too still. Also, I'm not too fond of her upper body moving down when she approaches. I see when they turn, Mikey is not moving his arms at all and, also, they all seem to have their hands in a default pose right now. I'm not sure if you have worked on this yet as I understand this is still blocking. Overall, I think it's coming out great!
Hi Wenlin interesting shot! Well i think you could add some up down in the beginning in luisa's walk/run and agree with Agni, that the upper body is moving a little too much when she stops. and with the other two characters, you could give them a more natural "standing" pose as in weight on one leg or something like that, Then it would be easier to figure out which foot should take the first step. Like With Vince he is already moving towards screen right and his foot (his left, screen right) is in the air which makes him look a little off balance, if you started with the other foot that would be justified.
Hi there! I really like this shot and the walk cycle! I would recommend to have both of the other characters move slightly as she approaches them as right now they seem too still. Also, I'm not too fond of her upper body moving down when she approaches. I see when they turn, Mikey is not moving his arms at all and, also, they all seem to have their hands in a default pose right now. I'm not sure if you have worked on this yet as I understand this is still blocking. Overall, I think it's coming out great!
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Hi Wenlin
ReplyDeleteinteresting shot!
Well i think you could add some up down in the beginning in luisa's walk/run and agree with Agni, that the upper body is moving a little too much when she stops. and with the other two characters, you could give them a more natural "standing" pose as in weight on one leg or something like that, Then it would be easier to figure out which foot should take the first step. Like With Vince he is already moving towards screen right and his foot (his left, screen right) is in the air which makes him look a little off balance, if you started with the other foot that would be justified.