I really dig this! I feel like any comments I'd come up with would come down to my taste and not necessarily what would make it better.
Bearing that in mind! I'd like to see a bit more nuance on the hand that isn't holding the pregnancy test. Maybe the wrist could flick some, as it appears just a touch stiff. Overall, though, really sweet work.
I like your overall performance I love your overlapping of the hand (the hand holding a stick) especially when he throws his hand forward. However, I feel the timing could be faster.. Nice work!
I really dig this! I feel like any comments I'd come up with would come down to my taste and not necessarily what would make it better.
ReplyDeleteBearing that in mind! I'd like to see a bit more nuance on the hand that isn't holding the pregnancy test. Maybe the wrist could flick some, as it appears just a touch stiff. Overall, though, really sweet work.
Good call. I'll try and liven up that hand. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI like your overall performance
ReplyDeleteI love your overlapping of the hand (the hand holding a stick) especially when he throws his hand forward.
However, I feel the timing could be faster..
Nice work!