Hi nice shot! I wonder which spot are you at but I think it will be nice if you offset the movement of the body... for example the arms moves up at the same time when the spine curls done.... i think it will look more better if you offset these
Nice work Tyler, Things are looking good. It's probably too late to change this now, but if you were to ever go back and revise it, I might think about lessening the intensity of the "laugh" pose. He goes from standing there, to the shoulders up shrug laugh, and i think that action is pretty big, but it feels a little abrupt and big. It's a really good juicy action to put in there...but if it were just more subtle, it might read a little better. The only other thought was maybe changing his facial expression at the very very end. It looks like he's angry and not "meek" or bashful like the dialogue portrays him. Anyways, nice work. Well done sir.
Hi nice shot!
ReplyDeleteI wonder which spot are you at but I think it will be nice if you offset the movement of the body... for example the arms moves up at the same time when the spine curls done.... i think it will look more better if you offset these
Good call! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteNice work Tyler, Things are looking good. It's probably too late to change this now, but if you were to ever go back and revise it, I might think about lessening the intensity of the "laugh" pose. He goes from standing there, to the shoulders up shrug laugh, and i think that action is pretty big, but it feels a little abrupt and big. It's a really good juicy action to put in there...but if it were just more subtle, it might read a little better. The only other thought was maybe changing his facial expression at the very very end. It looks like he's angry and not "meek" or bashful like the dialogue portrays him. Anyways, nice work. Well done sir.
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