Tyler! Nice work. Yeah, the stuff I have to comment on has to be nit-picky because the foundational stuff is all there. Nicely done. The only real suggestions I have would be to maybe stagger the movement/timing of the hands when he lifts them off his waist and goes into his nervous laugh pose. Right now they're both moving on the same frame and it gives kind of a "twinning" effect with the hands. You did a nice job staggering the movement when they go from the laugh to the pose where one hand is at his nose-bridge and the other is on his waist...but the only thing is both of those hands arrive at the same time. his hand gets to his nose exactly as his hand gets to his waist. I wouldnt change the animation, just moveing it a little might make it seem more natural. once again, nit-picky but overall nicely done!
Tyler!
ReplyDeleteNice work. Yeah, the stuff I have to comment on has to be nit-picky because the foundational stuff is all there. Nicely done. The only real suggestions I have would be to maybe stagger the movement/timing of the hands when he lifts them off his waist and goes into his nervous laugh pose. Right now they're both moving on the same frame and it gives kind of a "twinning" effect with the hands. You did a nice job staggering the movement when they go from the laugh to the pose where one hand is at his nose-bridge and the other is on his waist...but the only thing is both of those hands arrive at the same time. his hand gets to his nose exactly as his hand gets to his waist. I wouldnt change the animation, just moveing it a little might make it seem more natural. once again, nit-picky but overall nicely done!
Right on - I've tried staggering the hands and it definitely improves it. Thanks!
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