He seems a little bored for the voice, but that could be what you're going for! A couple of things I noticed:
-more snap in his left hand; maybe he could go quicker from pose to pose. right now it looks a little floaty. -his right hand lands on the table a little fast
-to fallow up on the hand comment (the one that hits the table), when it comes time to polish i think it might be nice to put some animation on the figures after the hand hits. This might give a more organic feel instead of just the hand hitting and stopping all at once.
-also i feel the mouth might be getting a little chattery. Might want to try and hold on a word or two. Seem like when he says "here" would be a good time to try this.
He seems a little bored for the voice, but that could be what you're going for! A couple of things I noticed:
ReplyDelete-more snap in his left hand; maybe he could go quicker from pose to pose. right now it looks a little floaty.
-his right hand lands on the table a little fast
All in all I like it. Good work!
Really good work! Like the fingure animation.
ReplyDelete-to fallow up on the hand comment (the one that hits the table), when it comes time to polish i think it might be nice to put some animation on the figures after the hand hits. This might give a more organic feel instead of just the hand hitting and stopping all at once.
-also i feel the mouth might be getting a little chattery. Might want to try and hold on a word or two. Seem like when he says "here" would be a good time to try this.
looks great!
Quicker hand movements and head movements to match energy of audio more. The emotion is good.
ReplyDeleteIt's very polished and good work, but I think the hands movements could be faster.
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